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EXPLANATION WRITING

Planning Notes   EXPLANATION WRITING

Idea Notes
1 Tyrone Tangata-Makiri
2 Heare Kutia
3 Tanielu Tele’a

 

Title Future Aspirations 
Introduction

Include an unusual fact. • a vivid description. • ask a question. • tell a brief story

Kia ora, and greetings to you all. Today I will be introducing to you what Future Aspiration is and how many people came. 

What is future aspiration?  Future aspiration is when 3 – 7 people (or more) come and introduce themselves to you and tell you about their journey and career. 

How many people came? There were 6 people that came. Tyrone Tangata-Makiri, Haare Kutia, David Clarke, Tanielu Tele’a, Tia Peleti and Shaniah McCarry. 

Information Reason 1 : 

Tyrone Tangata-Makiri is a good, strong man. He worked as an entrepreneur. An entrepreneur is a person who sets up a business and helps them with money. Tyrone Tangata-Makiri gave out a really good advice: Be an alien rather than a sheep. This means a sheep always follows other sheeps and aliens keep with their own sleeves and doesn’t copy others. 

Reason 2 :

Heare Kutia is a social worker. A social worker provides help and support to people with social issues such as housing, employment, financial or other personal issues. Heare Kutia talked about how she didn’t like reading & writing. 

Reason 3 : Tanielu Tele’a is Mrs Tele’as son. Tanielu Tele’a was a rugby player playing for the blues. When he was little he also used to play touch. A little quote that he gave out was, never give up! Tanielu Tele’a got injured on his knees. He just had his surgery. 
Conclusion

Summarize key points. • Offer an opinion or a suggestion. • Make a prediction. • Explain the topic’s importance.

Tyrone Tangata-Makiri, Heare Kutia and Tanielu Tele’a are very strong people. They will never ever give up on their dreams. They will work hard to follow their dreams and someday they will be successful. Thank you very much Tyrone Tangata-Makiri, Haare Kutia, David Clarke, Tanielu Tele’a, Tia Peleti and Shaniah McCarry for coming over and telling us about your career. 

Thank you very much for listening. 

Ka kite. 

 

Nutella Speech.

Hi, my name is Swaimah and today I will be saying a speech about Nutella. Nutella is a sweetened hazelnut cocoa spread made by Ferrero, an Italian company that’s the third-largest chocolate producer in the world.

 

Pietro Ferrero owned a bakery in Alba, an Italian town known for the production of hazelnuts. It was first introduced in 1964, It was originally created in Italy during World War II when baker Pietro Ferrero added ground hazelnuts to a chocolate spread to make up for a shortage of cocoa in the country. 

 

Nutella  was known as SuperCrema. The recipe was improved, leading to the creation of the first-ever jar of hazelnut and cocoa cream. Nutella was officially born. 

 

This chocolate and hazelnut spread is consumed in many ways and commonly used as a topping for breakfast toast, pancakes, waffles, and many more. 

 

Nutella contains: Palm oil, Cocoa, Hazelnuts, Skimmed milk powder and Vanillin. Nutella has 200 Calories, 12 Grams of fat, 21 Grams of sugar, 2 Grams of protein, 4% of the RDI calcium and 4% of the RDI of Iron. 

 

RDI means Recommended Dietary Intake  Nutella is often advertised as a quick and simple way to make a tasty, kid-friendly breakfast. Nutella reduces the risk of developing heart diseases. 

 

Nutella contains calcium that strengthens your bones and teeth. The iron in Nutella helps in making red blood cells in your body.  While most of the world loves Nutella, France is particularly keen on it. The country reportedly eats a quarter of all the pots that are produced. That’s about 75,000 tonnes of Nutella eaten in France each year. 

 

Thank You for listening to my speech. I hope you learned alot about Nutella. 

 

What makes good writing?

Today i will tell you what makes good writing. Good writing needs punctuations and personification. You  really need punctuations to make your writing interesting. You need verbs, similes, hyperbole and ideas. you really need a introduction, middle and concluetion. This is a paper sheet that me and my group did.